Bevan and Brendon (Show and not tell)

Tell: The table was filled with nice dishes.

Show: Hot steam started to rise from the dishes.The smell of it made me hungry. The sound of the chicken sizzling on the hot plate made my mouth water.

1 Response to "Bevan and Brendon (Show and not tell)"

  1. lis Says:

    You have described the scrumptious food vividly :) Good job, keep it up!

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