Ray Chow (Show and not tell)

Tell: The table was filled with nice dishes.

Show: The fragrant aroma of my favourite Fish 'n' Chips, which was painstakenly cooked by my mother, wafted through the air. Having not eaten that for what seemed like a millenium, I made a dash to the dining room to wolf down my behemoth plate of food.

1 Response to "Ray Chow (Show and not tell)"

  1. lis Says:

    Good use of adjectives here! Well done, Ray :)

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